Atsu Academy Student
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-07-29 Age : 28
| Subject: Nara Light jutsu Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:47 pm | |
| KSP 8 used- Spoiler:
Ninjutsu # Level I: Allows the ninja to use basic Ninjutsu (note that some basic ninjutsu have other requirements). # Level II: Allows the ninja to use basic ninjutsu and jutsu from an element of his choice. # Level III: Allows the ninja to use basic ninjutsu and to have two ninjutsu elements. The second will only allow the ninja to use ninjutsu of lower rank than himself.
Genjutsu # Level I: Allows the ninja the ability to use up to C-rank Genjutsu of a single sub-type.
ASP 7 used- Spoiler:
Assasination # Level I: The user is stealthy and clever, able to hide in the shadows and move quietly, giving the ninja an edge. User is immune to Chakra Sensory Level I and is 10% less likely to get caught in break-ins. # Level II: The Ninja is learned in anatomy, capable of targeting the vitals of an enemy's body with precision, for incapacitation, or assassination. User is immune to Chakra Sensory level II and is 20% less likely to get caught in break ins. # Level III: Worthy of the title Assassin, the ninja has practiced and perfected arts of killing, making him well-knowledgeable in the many possible forms of death. User is immune to Chakra Sensory level III and is 30% less likely to get caught in break ins.
Kekkei Genkai Mastery Level I: Allows the ninja to use his Kekkei Genkai abilities or jutsus up to rank C. .
Ninjutsu 3 used cp used secondary- Spoiler:
Name: Kirigakure no Jutsu [Hidden Mist Technique] Type: Ninjutsu Sub-type: Suiton Rank: D Orientation: Supplementary Cost:3 Effects: A ninjutsu that disperses the user's chakra through the air to manipulate the water particles and alter their composition to produce a mist of varying thickness. Veiling an enemy's sight, this technique can be taken advantage of if used right, those who specialize in assassination and combat not based on sight best suited for battle in mist.
Primary Nara Clan jutsu 16 cp used- Spoiler:
Kagemane Type: Ninpo Sub-Type: Kage Rank: D Cost 3 Orientation: Offensive The signature of the Nara, this jutsu allows the user to control his opponent, touching the enemy’s shadow with his own, if it is on a good range. This makes the movements of the target be the same as the user, only with a mirror effect. This jutsu will cost 2 CP per turn instead of just one, for each opponent caught.
Kage Kubi Shibari in the Jutsu Type: Ninpo Sub-Type: Kage Rank: C cost 7 Orientation: Offensive After an opponent has been captured with the Kagemane no Jutsu, the user can the extend shadow to the throat of the target in the form of a hand to suffocate him. This shadow is physical, binding an opponent's body and capable of actual damage. Requires Kagemane upon the target.
Kagemane Sattou Type: Ninpo Sub Type: Kage Rank: C cost 6 Orientation: Offensive This technique is used to capture particularly nimble opponents by generating a Shadow while moving, surprising the enemy by generally appearing next to them and casting their shadow forward without stopping, momentum pushing them forward. This Jutsu is treated as Kagemane and also costs 2 CP per turn to maintain.
Genjutsu 8 cp used - Spoiler:
Name: Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings] Type: Genjutsu Sub-type: Sight Rank: E Orientation: Supplementary Cost:1 Effects: A simple Genjutsu used to hide an object by altering the appearance of the image. If the target comes in contact with the hidden object the genjutsu is broken.
Name: Henseiki [Voice Mimic] Type: Genjutsu Sub-type: Hear Rank: E Orientation: Supplementary Cost:1 Effects: An academy level illusion in which causes the target to perceive the user’s voice as someone else's. The user must have heard the voice they wish to imitate.
Name: Kori Shinchuu no Jutsu [Sly Mind Affect Technique] Type: Genjutsu Sub-type: Sight Rank: E Orientation: Supplementary Cost:2 Effects: A tricky illusion which causes the target to travel around in circles. If the ninja is unable to detect the illusion very quickly, they can become exhausted mentally and physically when they are unable to reach their desired target by traveling along the same path over and over.
Name: Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu [Demonic Illusion: Vision of Hell] Type: Genjutsu Sub-type: Sight Rank: D Orientation: Supplementary Cost:4 Effects: An illusion that makes the target see a shocking scene, such as a dying friend or anything else the user sees fit, making the target lower their defenses
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In conclusion 8/8 ksp used 7/7 asp used 27/50 cp used 75/100 jp used
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Atsu Academy Student
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-07-29 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Nara Light jutsu Sun Aug 15, 2010 12:50 pm | |
| i didnt know if i had to request to be a nara because from what i have observed other people have been making characters that do not have a kekei genkai but then there jutsus speak other wise some if im wrong just let me know and ill fixmy character because ive been planning to be a nara since the beginning... | |
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Chibi Bob Nukem Ame Jōnin
Posts : 269 Join date : 2010-05-23 Age : 32 Location : Russia
| Subject: Re: Nara Light jutsu Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:29 pm | |
| Well you aren't approved yet so this really shouldn't be posted, but you've been waiting a while so might as well help you out.
You're skills and abilities are fine, but your 10JP over the max so drop a D-rank or re-do some C's. | |
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Atsu Academy Student
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-07-29 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Nara Light jutsu Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:34 pm | |
| um thanx but one question i get 50 and if my math is correct i got it correctly still i have remaining 7 jp | |
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Chibi Bob Nukem Ame Jōnin
Posts : 269 Join date : 2010-05-23 Age : 32 Location : Russia
| Subject: Re: Nara Light jutsu Sun Aug 15, 2010 11:46 pm | |
| You get 100JP and each D costs 10 & C costs 15. | |
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Atsu Academy Student
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-07-29 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Nara Light jutsu Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:40 am | |
| ohhh thanx for the clearing up | |
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Soujirou Suna Tokujō
Posts : 194 Join date : 2009-10-14
| Subject: Re: Nara Light jutsu Mon Aug 16, 2010 12:41 am | |
| Three things wrong with this
1st you are spending over 100 jp, which i am guessing bob was alluding too 2nd you can not have two ninjutsu/ninpo with your current skill set up which means that you must drop either suiton or the nara jutsu's 3rd you don't even have your char approved yet | |
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Atsu Academy Student
Posts : 27 Join date : 2010-07-29 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Nara Light jutsu Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:06 am | |
| 1st was fixed 2nd was edited snf 3rd i know its not like its never going to be approved and besides i made a new char because kono is to dam inactive so im going to ame.... | |
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Soujirou Suna Tokujō
Posts : 194 Join date : 2009-10-14
| Subject: Re: Nara Light jutsu Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:58 pm | |
| ... no offense but as a genin your rank is D meaning that a secondary element would be at E-rank | |
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